Hi, thanks a lot of helping me fixed the grammar, English is my second language so I'm weak in it. Moreover, I try to make my best for gathering and making some video on pets, so this video was the first one. It might be some kind of boring to see images fly over the video, but I will try my best to make some expression out of it.One positive comment and one negative comment I'll make and I hope you don't mind me posting the negative comment, but I felt I had to.
Positive: Cute video and cute pups. I especially like the ones that have personality to them. And the music is sweet too.
Negative: Your description underneath needs working. Here's what you wrote: Nowadays, dogs and puppies are making the world a better place to live, its making the world become a life. They does not only loyal to their owner but are very valuable when you are stress. So take a good care of them, and be happy with them!
Here are some pointers to help make it clearer: For it's, you need an apostrophe because you're saying it is. The part after the comma (live) doesn't make much sense even though I get what you mean, so I would rephrase it. Your whole 2nd sentence should be rephrased too even though I got what you meant. For example: not "they does not" but they are not; you need a comma before but, and add an "ed" after stressed. Other than that, cool video.